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PostSubject: [English] Walking the Streets   [English] Walking the Streets Icon_minitimeFri Apr 20, 2012 3:42 pm

Okay, so I've decided to post some stories I write in English Very Happy

So basically, if I put [English] at the start, it's something I wrote for English.

Okay, onto the actual story:
What we had to do was create a story with five main bodies. Each body used different techniques, with the final body using all the previous techniques we had to utilize (teacher set techniques for each body). This is my final product.

Personally, I feel the ending was weird, but you may think differently, so I would appreciate your thoughts on that, and the story as a whole. I don't previously have a grade for this yet, but when I get it back, I will edit this to include it.
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PostSubject: Re: [English] Walking the Streets   [English] Walking the Streets Icon_minitimeTue May 08, 2012 3:21 am

I'll take a look at both when I get home,
It does sound like a good idea.
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