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GaffaTapeMan
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PostSubject: A Story (Name change will happen soon)   A Story (Name change will happen soon) Icon_minitimeSun Oct 16, 2011 4:44 am

Hey everyone, I'm back with a newly updated version of my story. I'm not sure if it's much more, but it's better I think. I feel it is a bit smoother.

Anyway, still no name yet. Can't think of anything silent

Oh well, constructive criticism would be appreciated here. Same as last time, I'd like to know what you liked and disliked the most, so I know what's working and what isn't. Oh, and I'd actually like at least one reply with constructive criticism this time, please lol!
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PostSubject: Re: A Story (Name change will happen soon)   A Story (Name change will happen soon) Icon_minitimeSun Oct 16, 2011 4:52 am

so far the only thing that isn't quite right with it is the font, you might get more people looking at it with a easier to read font.

then again you'd get more people looking at it if we had more members

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PostSubject: Re: A Story (Name change will happen soon)   A Story (Name change will happen soon) Icon_minitimeSun Oct 16, 2011 4:56 am

Aha, yeah. More people on the forum would be nice Very Happy

But I just went with the font for fun, I'll probably change it to a more straight-forward font when I've written more Razz

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PostSubject: Re: A Story (Name change will happen soon)   A Story (Name change will happen soon) Icon_minitimeSat Dec 03, 2011 8:45 am

So hows the story going?

Do you think we should ask everyone we know well to join our forum?
that should get us half a dozen more members.

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